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A Hinata Story Ch.1

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A new school year is coming for the kids of Konaha and the new students from the sand. They all deicide to do something as their last week before school starts so all the students go rollerblading. Unfortunately only some of the students could go, Kiba, Hinata, Sasuke, Ino, Sakura, Lee, Neji, Temari, Tenten, and Shino (but he isn't here yet). So at the rollerblading party, Hinata got unsure whether or not she should try this type of skating. Hinata was very good at ice-skating, she would always do tricks and go really fast she even would overlap Kiba in their race, but as soon as she put on her skates she wouldn't get up.
"Come on Hinata, you'll be great!" Said Kiba as went towards Hinata, wearing his skates and reaching his hand towards Hinata so she would come.
"I-I don't know Kiba. I never done this before," She started to blush, "I'm sorta scared, maybe you should just go without me."
"No way! Your coming with me whether you want to or not!" and with that Kiba grabbed Hinata's hand and pulled her up. He  was smiling when he lifted her up but now his face was red, for now Hinata was leaning right against his chest and was tightly holding on to his shirt. "Come on Hinata you'll make us both fall down. Here I'll help you walk and stand," Hinata looked up at him and loosened her grip and started to stand up straight.
"Thanks Kiba." She smiled her famous smile that would get anyone to fall in love with her.
Kiba helped Hinata on the rink and they started to skate together, that is until Hinata got the hang of it and started to do all types of tricks and started to go really fast. Kiba got tired he usually had more energy than Hinata but when it came to ice-skating or rollerblading or anything like that Kiba was terrible at it, and Hinata was amazing.
"Hey Hinata I'm gonna get us some snacks you want anything?" Asked Kiba as Hinata was coming closer to him, almost overlapping him a fourth time.
She waited a bit thinking, "Um…sure Kiba I'll take a blu-"
"Alright that's a blue raspberry slushy and a pretzel, right?" said Kiba interrupting her.
"Yep! You know me, don't you Kiba." Hinata said with a smile. "I'm going to skate some more, okay?"
"Sure that's fine Hinata I'll get our food." with that Kiba skated off to the concession stand.

}Kiba's P.O.V.{

"I walked to the stands and waited in line it only took a minute and then I got to order.
"Hi. I'll take two pretzels, one blue raspberry flavored slushy, and one cherry flavored slushy." After I spoke I looked at who I was talking to. It was a girl my age, with brown hair that was braided in two that went all the way down a bit past her shoulders. I looked at the girls face and realized that she had a little blush on her face when she looked at me.
"um…um…sure it will be $15, but…if you go out with me it will be free." something about the way she said the last part made me think that  if I said yes I would regret it for the rest of my life.
"Sorry I can't I already have a girlfriend," I was lying but the girl couldn't tell but I decided to point my finger to Hinata, "see that girl doing the tricks, that's her." since Hinata is the only girl I hang out with and like so of course I would say her as my 'girlfriend' and well, hey my feelings towards Hinata are the same as any guy would have for there girl friend.
"Oh I see. Well I'll go get your food and drinks." said the girl as she walked away.
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After I got mine and Hinata's food and drinks, I started walking to find a table.
"Hey You!"
I turned around and I saw Sasuke walking and staring at me, so I stopped and sighed. I absolutory hate this guy he is sometimes worse than Naruto.
"What do you want uke." I said me and some other of the guys would always always call him that it was a little joke but actually he would be a seme but really Sasuke is not gay nor bi so he reacts when we call him uke or something like that, like right now he's giving me the death glare.
"Shut up! I came to ask you something." he was still giving me a glare but it wasn't as deadly as before.
"Fine what is it?" I was a bit pissed that I had to talk to him but I also was pretty curious what he wanted.
"So I was wondering…" okay I think I just saw him blush, this is getting weird, "what type of relationship are you and Hinata in?"
WHAT!!! I didn't know what to say, I mean does this mean he likes Hinata!?!? No he can't he's got all of his fan girls he can go out with so he can't have any feelings for Hinata. Right?
"Umm…well…" I cold feel my face turning red, "you see me and Hinata…well since we've been friends for a long time I guess I guess people could say we are together, but we aren't dating…" say yet damn it or else he might try and steal her from you!!! Say yet!! "…ye-"
"Oh so you guys aren't dating, well then." he stopped he looked like he was deep in thought. "I guess that's all. See ya," and with that he went off.
Well at lest he didn't take any of mine or Hinata's snacks-!! When-!! How-!! He took one of the pretzels!!!! That jerk why steal from me when he could just buy it himself or make one of his fan girls buy him one!!! Ugh, oh well, me and Hinata can share the one. I better go bring her our snacks. But…Sasuke made me remember what happened last year when I talked to this one guy about Hinata.
=Flashback=
So one day I walked into the bathroom after walking a bit after school with Hinata, I left Akamaru with Hinata so no guys could attack her while I was gone.  But when I was about to wash my hands some weird guy with blond hair in a ponytail but had bangs that covered his left eye came into the room.
"Hi there! un." he said smiling. He was wearing or school uniform, white shirt and black pants, but he had a black jacket with red clouds all over it.
"do I know you?" I said, "you look familiar?"
"sorry that pick up line doesn't work on me, un."  he said with a smirk. I gave him a glare, "ha, just joking, un. No we never met before bt lots of the girls talk about me, my name is Diedara. un."
"oh ya I've heard of you." great I'm with this guy all the girls like, the guy that has an attitude and terrible temper, but who am I to judge; although, this guy, he looks like a girl. "so is there something you wanted?"
"Actually…" I waited for him to say something. "nope theres nothing." I sighed he was just wasting my time. "but, you know that Hinata chick?"
I noded, "ya I know her. Why?" I was a bit angry that he was going to talk about her and that he called her a chick, I get jeoluos easily when it comes to Hinata, though I'd hate to amdit it.
"I just…" he stoped to glance at me to see if I was listening or not…I think, "well she is very innocent, but beautiful, un. She is one of the most popular girls I have ever met and yet she hasn't had a boyfriend yet in her entire life, un. I mean all the guys I know like her, but she is so damn innocent that I bet no one wants to take it away or even make-out with her. She is like an angel at this school that is untouchable, un, but of course if you ask anyone what they're thinking about when they are thinking about Hinata, well I know all my friends would say something like 'I'm thinking about getting into Hinata's pants' or 'I'm thinking about me doing Hinata when she is tied to a bed naked.'"
I blushed at that part and turned my head so he couldn't see my blush. I couldn't believe that now I was thinking about myself going into Hinata's pants or even seeing her…her…noo! I can't think about that! "so why are you telling me this?" I said still trying to get my mind off that image.
"Well I think I will be the one to touch the untouchable angel and take away her innocents before anyone else, un. I want that beautiful piece of art mine." he smiled at what he was saying, really I was about to punch him, but before I could he said, "well see ya!" and with that he left. I was going to follow him but I decided not to scince I had Akamaru with Hinata to protect her and  I also needed to wash my hands.
Afterwards I went to Hinata and we talked but once she left, me and Akamaru spoke and he told me that Hinata and that Deidara guy just talked a bit and then he left, he didn't do anything to her so I was pretty glad, "but I still don't like him at all." I said mostly to myself when me and Akamaru were alone.
=end of flashback=
I wonder where we shall sit. Hinata's probably hungry by now, I know I am.
I wish i owned Naruto or any of the characters but unfortantly (did i spell that right) i don't but i don't remember who actually does own it....
This is my first Naruto story and first story that i'm planning on having as a seris. if anyone has any advise on my story please tell me and please review i really like having comments on my stories :D i hope you all liked this XD
oh btw i have no idea who hinata will end up being with so people you guys can choose there is kibahina, shinohina, sasuhina, nejihina, deihina, and tobihina read my journal about this story its called my naruto story or something like that and it sorta tells you about this story
i hope you all like this....wait didnt i already say this :O oh well xD the second one will not be called A Hinata story ch.2 it will be called 'a year we will not forget Ch. 2' or something like that and will probaly come out in April sometime or the second week of May at the latest...but after the 3rd chapter i will not continue unless i get more than atleast 3 comments on each chapter. so PLEASE COMMENT!!!!
oh and btw my account on fanfiction.net has a little voting poll so just go to fanfiction.net type in my user name (666random4life) and you'll find me and just vote for one of your favorite hinata couples for me to put as the main couple :D yay!! time to vote!!! and don't worry i'm working on the next chapter :work: not anymore XD i finished that chapter here it is [link]
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smurfeyn's avatar
It is good, but to make it easier to read you could shorten the sentences and use the enter a bit more.
Else it will become a whole mess of letters and harder to read